LYLS Chapter 3 - Crash

Let's Play

"I looked up from the checkerboard. We were sitting on the plush carpet, across from each other at a small, low table. 'There is an art to checkers, I will have you know. Besides, Edward, I told you, I'm not playing chess with a vampire who is almost 100 years ahead of me in experience. I can do checkers...

...'Cheater, right over here! You are such a cheater!' Edward dissolved into laughter."

Their first kiss where Bella feels comfortable touching him back via gkkmouse

"'Ok.' I promised, kissing him, letting my tongue slide between his lips, willing him to touch his tongue to mine. I was pushing the boundaries with his mouth and I knew it. Part of me suspected that Edward was more worried about his venom touching my skin than he needed to be. 'Do I have time to take a quick bath and nap?'"

Burning Gaze

"I felt Edward's gaze burning into me. 'Bella, you're killing me. Eat faster or put some clothes on.' His voice was rough, seductive."

Rip Them Off

"In an instant, Edward was behind me. I heard fabric rip and saw his shorts fall next to me in shreds. His hard body pressed against me urgently. I had a momentary pang of sadness that those shorts were ruined before I realized what he was starting, quickly, differently. He growled and yanked my panties down slightly before ripping them off of me in a blur of a movement, next ripping the clasp of my bra apart in back, letting the straps fall down my arms and onto the floor. I moaned reflexively. He grabbed my hips as he slammed his hard length into me, thrusting quickly, low grunts escaping his throat. I gasped and arched my back, and his body moved faster, pushing deep into me. I felt his hand move into my hair and suddenly he was pulling my head back, his hand fisted in my curls. He groaned loudly, thrusting with abandon against my flesh, his other hand still grabbing my hip forcefully. I realized I couldn't move my body away from him at all; I was trapped by his grip on me. My heartbeat raced and he reacted immediately, leaning his head down close to my neck, growling."

Lose Control

"He was silent for a moment. 'I don't think I harmed you, at least I hope not. But it's a fine line. I had no regard for your body, your need. I thought I had more...control than that. I thought I could pleasure you first and foremost. I just had to have you, I took you like a fucking monster...' he put his head back down on his arm...

...'You just needed to...fuck me.' I said, pushing my chin up, finding strength in the truth. He let out a soft maon and let his head fall back against the cushion of the couch. 'I think that's pretty normal.'"

Slow Love

"I moved my body over his, the heat of my body touching his cool hardness, and leaned down to kiss him, rubbing against him, our bodies sliding easily against each other. His eyes were full of the most intense love, it made my heart hammer in my chest to see him look at me with such naked adoration and need. I lowered myself onto him, gasping at the sensation of him, so deep in me. He watched me tenderly as I struggled to not cry. 'I love you, Bella,' he almost choked the words out."

Review by : twisherry

"OMG did Bella say HOT? Cause yeah that was HOT.

Started off so sweet and innocent with playing checkers….awww…then some joking about how old they are….awww….Edward cheating at checkers…..FTW…then he goes to hunt while she takes a bath and nap…..aw again.

Time moves forward and sweet loving husband has set out a little carpet picnic for his wife….oh but wait…she has something very naughty on her mind….did he say she was a sex kitten? I guess she’ll show him…and then I guess he showed her.

WOW, him devouring her was unbelievably mind blowing….for her…for him…and for me. The ripping of the clothes, who doesn’t want to be ravaged like that even if for only 30 seconds….I’ll say it…no one. Then of course, in total Edward fashion he feels guilty. How truly Edward to feel bad at the hottest moment for Bella so far. For someone who knows her so well, he obviously was out of his mind during this, because he couldn’t tell how much she loved it. The “I just had to have you, I took you like a fucking monster”…how poetic, since he’s always thought of himself that way, but she never has. I’m so glad that you gave her the chance to really explain what that meant for her. He needed to know.

These are the moments I love more than anything. When she’s telling him how she’s felt all this time, thinking that he resisted her physically so easily and her “heart would crack” when he would pull away from her….and then for her to feel this unbridled desire and his reaction to her in such a purely physical way…that he just needed her with no regard….priceless interaction. To hear him explain how he’s always longed for her…but just needed to remain in control and then for her to comfort him and say that what he did was normal. LOVED IT ALL. Of course, it had to be those midnight blue boy shorts…hehehehe.

And then to end it with a slow, soft, intimate lovemaking scene, just was the perfect end to a perfect chapter.

Again…brilliantly captured moments. I love them over and over. Your writing still amazes me."

Great quote via : babbles

“I never expected my self-controlled and brooding husband to be so insatiable.” I kept my voice low, husky.

“I never expected my doe-eyed and blushing bride to be such a sex kitten,” he countered, his tone matching mine."