Saturday, December 19, 2009

LYLS Chapter 11 - Barriers Down

 

Desperately Clinging

"I just wanted to hold him. It felt so good to hold each other with the pain we both felt out in the open; the last barrier was at least discovered, if not banished.

I fell asleep after awhile, after we clung to each other desperately, after we had listened to the sounds of each other breathing for long uninterrupted moments, after we had spent long stretches of time in our own thoughts trying to make sense of everything we had been through together. At one point he had turned to me and kissed me, pouring his entire soul - yes, his soul - into the kiss, his eyes never closing, of course, his hands holding my face gently. He had never kissed me like that, in all of our thousands of kisses. Nothing even close. I knew if he could cry he would have completely broken down tonight. It broke my heart that he had lied to me, telling me he didn't love me. Worse, that he did love me and still left. I knew the weight that my sadness had put on him, but he asked me to believe that he could handle it, that it wasn't for me to shoulder alone."



 

 Family Visit

"'I thought it over. I wasn't ready to leave yet, but I had to admit the idea of a visit with the family sounded fun. 'Can't they come here? There are two other bedrooms here and you said there's another cabin, right ? I want to stay awhile longer. Tell them to come visit for a couple of days.'

His bright smile was beautiful. 'Excellent. I'll let them know to come join us here.'"



 

Funtimes in the Shower

"In an instant, he had positioned all four of the nozzles so they were blasting directly at my torso and was on his knees, my thighs over his shoulders, my back pressed against the cold stone walls of the shower. He looked up at me, smiling beautifully. 'Brilliant,' he murmured, his eyes looking down at my body in front of his, his chest letting out a deep moan. He leaned his head forward and pushed his tongue against me slowly, moving small circles around my clit, his fingers gripping the flesh around my spread hips on his shoulders, holding my body easily....

...'Edward, oh God, it feels so good...baby I can feel your tongue on me...Edward do you like to taste me?...oh God, Edward...' I moaned, moving my hips on his shoulders, pressing my body hard against his face, my hands reaching down to hold his head to me. I felt myself careening towards climax and grabbed my breast involuntarily, causing Edward to convulse below me, crying out against my skin. My climax hit me warm and hard, his mouth moving in perfect synchrony with the pulsing of my body, his lips moaning hard against me. He slowed his movements and I wiggled my hips against his face."



 

Party is Here

"We sat at the kitchen table for awhile, telling our favorite bad jokes. Edward had about five times as many as I did.....

....I looked over my shoulder at him, he was laughing. He leaned down to kiss me and said, 'The quiet has been so nice.'

'What?' I asked.

Before he had a chance to answer my question. I heard Emmett's loud voice boom from outside the front door, 'Get decent, lovebirds! The party is HERE!'"


Review by EJ Santry:

Honey, the in-laws have arrived!

The first part of this chapter was heart wrenching. That being so overwhelmed with love for someone. To have that aching need to show them, and in a way prove to them, how much you ardently adore them. How life is absolutely nothing if they aren't a part of it. You showed that and more.

I love the "normal" conversation while Bella cooked. The telling of jokes and just being together, then switching to the smell conversation as one of those mixtures of getting to know you, yet getting to know what she will be like. Little discoveries.

Great quote via twisherry:

"Get decent, lovebirds! The party is here!"

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