Thursday, December 17, 2009

LYLS Chapter 12 - Arrival


So Much Fun

"I looked up and saw a blur of movement that stilled into Alice, standing in front of me, bouncing and clapping her hands. 'You guys are having so much fun!' I looked at Edward and we both laughed at her statement. It hadn't been a question.

'We have.' I agree, smiling and hugging her. The rest of the family filed into the kitchen, smiling at me, giving me hugs before turning their eyes to Edward. A silence swept over the room. Edward was learning against the counter, the heel of each of his hands resting on the edge of the counter on either side of his waist, one leg crossed over the casually. His hair was, if possible, messier than usual. His eyes gleamed. A smile played on his lips as he listened to his family react to the scene around them....

Rosalie let out a dry laugh. 'Who would have guessed getting laid would have such an impact on Edward? Certainly not me.' Her voice dripping with sarcasm, but her eyes were soft, smiling. Emmett laughed next to her, nodding.

Esme defended Edward quietly, staring at him lovingly. 'I think it's more than that, Rosalie.'

'It is.' Jasper breathed. 'It's...unbelievable.'...

I suddenly saw Edward through his family's eyes. I realized how calm he was. He had been like that ever since our first morning here; I suppose I had stopped noticing it. With the exception of a few difficult moments, his eyes were always relaxed now, crinkling with an almost constant smile. His brooding was no longer dark, but instead thoughtful; he seemed more quirky and observant than morose and tortured. His quiet demeanor hadn't disappeared, but the quality had changed. His thoughtful posture was confident, relaxed, sexy."



 The Yacht via gkkmouse

"I turned to Alice. 'Where did you even have space in your luggage for a karaoke machine anyway?' I asked, totally confused.

Alice looked at me was though I was very slow. 'What do you mean, Bella? We brought the boat.' She walked me to the window and pointed to the large vessel moored to the dock down the beach. I groaned. Of course they would have a gigantic yacht at their disposal."



Just watch this and picture Emmett, Jasper & Edward...boys will always be boys

"...They emerged from the room in shorts, all shirless, each with one of my shirts tied over their heads like scarves.

'What the...?' Rosalie laughed. Alice and I stared at them, our mouths gaping open. They looked ridiculous."



We know the girls did much better than the boys - more like the real thing

"All three girls leaned into the microphone singing, sultry, 'Emmett, can you handle this? Jasper, can you handle this? Edward can you handle this? I don't think you can handle this! Whoo!' At the last sound they all threw their backs to us, shaking their hips, revealing three of the skimpiest bikinis I had ever seen. The sight was...indescribable, and I was struck, once again, knowing Bella would be exponentially more stunning once she had changed. The thought made me almost dizzy with desire. She was too much for me as she was....

...The song ended and I stood up, not caring if my pants needed adjustment, not caring how abruptly I ended an admittedly fun evening. Bella stared at me, her chest heaving. 'Ok,' I said quietly. 'Time to say goodnight.'

Everyone else appeared more than happy to leave and got to exactly what we had in mind for ourselves. They were gone in seconds. We were alone. It was all I could do to not rip Bella's bikini from her body and take her over the couch."



Ecstasy

"I turned my back to him and leaned over the back of the couch. 'I'm sorry I teased you tonight, Edward. Take it out on me.' I pushed my ass towards him, looking at him over my shoulder in the way that made him crazy.

He whispered my name, his tone desperate, and came up behind me. He rubbed himself against my entrance, then grabbed my ass with both hands and pushed into me. I cried out at how hard he was, my need for him overwhelming me. He pulled himself all the way out, and I moaned, begging him to come into me again. He spanked me and I cried out in ecstasy. 'I bet you'd like my hard cock in you. You're so wet, Bella. I can tell how much you want it.' His voice was quiet, a soft undertone of love in the otherwise hard words."


Review by EJ Santry:

"I loved the family's reaction to Edward! I can't imagine spending decades watching someone being lonely and discontented, and then to see them in a complete state of serenity and bliss (see...I get the Blissward references now). Jasper's "it's unbelievable" was especially poignant.

The karaoke was fun, and this girl is not cool enough to NOT do it. I believe the starfish and I have some plans to embarrass ourselves in front of the Niagara Falls populous come Nov.

As for the lemon in this chapter... Not only was the actually getting down to business incredibly hot, but the anticipation before hand. Him running his hands over her body and lingering to breathe her in. GAH!"

Great quote via many reviewers:

"It is." Jasper breathed. "It's...unbelievable."

2 comments:

runsatdawn said...

You have no idea how much I am LOOOOOOVING this, whooo!

Bammers said...

loved it can't wait for more thanks....

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