Saturday, December 19, 2009

LYLS Chapter 10 - A Necessary Release


The Rug

"'Edward, what is it about seeing me on this rug that sets you off?' I gasped as one hand ran up between my legs, his moan escaping as his fingers made contact with the skin under my bikini. His other hand caressed the side of my breast. We managed a relatively chaste morning and hadn't made love in almost 12 hours. I laughed, and then blushed, at the thought of eternity like this.

'I think it's the sight of you, anywhere...' He pressed against me and then pulled my bikini down, immediately yanking his boxers around his knees. His arms slipped under my hips, raising them off the floor slightly. I pushed myself up onto my forearms, and raised my bottom into the air in front of him, making him kneel behind me. 'God, Bella, you're gorgeous....'"


 

 Get Edward Going

"His hand stroked my hip while the other pushed two fingers gently inside me, seeing if I was ready for him. He moved his hand and positioned his body at my entrance, pushing into me. He held my hips steady against his movements and with his other hand reached around to rub my clit. He pushed into me, and with my body secured against his, he was deep inside me; the beautiful pleasure flirted on the edge of pain. I cried out."



 

 Taste Myself

"'Oh God Edward, I can taste myself on you...Edward...I can't get enough of you...' I hiccupped against him, trying to steady myself with a deep breath. His lips kissed my jaw softly, his voice soothing in my ear.

'Forever, Bella, we have forever.'"



 

Mood Changer

"I wanted to pull Edward out of whatever dark mood had claimed him.

I walked over to the suitcase, and pulled out a soft satin bag. I pulled out the beautiful black lace garments, the matching bra, underwear, garter belt, and stockings. I pulled out the box with the beautiful stilettos. I took a deep breath, and dressed for Edward. I stumbled upon some long black satin sashes at the bottom of the bag and pulled them out, a plan forming in my head."



 

Tie Him Up

"'Stay there, love.' I walked over to him, amazed at how the lingerie made me feel, my legs felt surprisingly long and graceful in the heels. His eyes watched every move I made. I pulled the sashes between my hands, smiling at him.

'What do you have there, my sweet wife?' He growled playfully at me, his eyes lusty, his body slowly moving back down in bed, his gorgeous form was long and lean across the mattress.

'I have something that you are going to pretend is tying you securely to the bed.' I laughed.'

He looked at the sashes and said quietly, his voice full of the love I saw in his eyes. 'It would be like tying you up with string cheese, Bella.'"



 

Like This?

"'I want to touch you, darling.' He whimpered.

I smiled and ran my hands up my torso to my breasts. 'Like this?' He groaned, nodding, his body pushing against mine, his leg writhing under me. 'Stay still, my love.' I whispered, rocking on him, finding a rhythm, my heart beat picking up, y breath catching in my throat.

'Do you love me, Edward?' she moaned....

'Beyond comprehension...' I whispered...

'Say the words.' She said quietly...

'I love you, Bella. So much it hurts.' My voice was hoarse...

'Do you need me?....Tell me you need me.' Her body moved over me....

...'I need you, Bella I need you, oh God I can't live without you.' I gasped the words. 'Please forgive me.' I begged too quietly for her to hear.

...'Promise me you won't leave me again,' she choked....'say it.'

I let out a dry sob. 'I will never leave you, Bella. I will never leave you.'

...'I'm so sorry, Bella, oh my God, I'm so sorry.' I moaned against her...

...'I'm fine, really, I'm fine.' She inhaled deeply and looked at me. She took a deep breath and smiled weakly. 'I guess it just still really hurts sometimes.'"



Forgiveness

"My face broke at this admission, her admission that she still hurts. Relief flooded me, heartbreak flooded me, guilt flooded me; my head fell against her shoulder. 'I wish every second I could have made a different decision.'

'I know.' She pulled her face to mine, kissing me softly. 'I realize that now. You made a mistake. I forgive you, I really do.'"


Review by RichelleCullen:

"Lola,
I thought this chapter really flowed with the others because her unresolved pain over his leaving her in NM is such an important part of who they are, and something I felt was not really fully resolved in the books. (a wedding ring does NOT fix everything, we know that) I'm glad you addressed it and I'm glad their lovemaking didn't just push it to the back burner. Their lovemaking stopped because of this, as it is still unresolved. I'm glad you're writing the FULL version of Edward and Bella's relationship, the pain and growth along with the awesome sex. Great job.
love, Richelle"

Great quote via twisherry:

"Forever, Bella, we have forever."

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