LYLS Chapter 5 - Tingling

Hours

"Edward kissed me, taking my bottom lip between both of his. He looked at me hesitantly before pulling my lip into his mouth, his tongue softly running back and forth across the flesh, his lips covering his teeth. I didn't move a muscle, I stifled a moan; I didn't want the moment to go away. I felt a small tingling on my lip, nothing more. He moaned against me, relaxing, and began kissing me again, deeper, whispering my name. I wrapped my arms around his neck, throwing a leg over his hip, pulling him to me. We kissed for hours, relishing in the feel of each others mouths. Every now and then he let his tongue touch mine briefly, the contact like a bolt of electricity shooting down my body, my body hungered to let him explore."

Tingle

"Encouraged by my reaction, Edward took my nipple gently into his mouth, careful to protect my flesh from his teeth, and sucked, his tongue flicking hard against my peak. I felt as though there were an immediate connection between my nipple and my core, my body shook with each strong flick of his tongue. My skin began to tingle deliciously, more sensitive than I had ever felt it before, each nerve ending responding to his touch."

Review by lovebuggkiss:

"The middle of the night is such an intimate time. It felt…." I searched for the right word. "It felt like we were acting out a dream."- < that's wonderful, it plays part to your sequel, and their agreement. :)

The way you wrote them, it's like… we all got to read them fall in love… and our own fics play off of that… there's already been character build up, so no one focuses on them falling more in love…You started from where meyer left them, in the beginning, starting their life together, on the day of marriage… you showed them growing, and becoming stronger together. That's another thing that makes these two fics amazing.

-"My adorable, delicate flower."- one of my favorite things, are Edwards nicknames for Bella. The cute, sweetness of them.

-'I rubbed my center against him, realizing we had not gone this long without making love for almost two days – nighttime included. "I miss you."'- I loved that. =)"

Great quote via many reviewers:

"I didn't want you because I was lonely. Bella, I wanted you because I belong to you."

and

"Are you expecting any answer other than, 'Please Edward, lick me now?' Really?"