Wednesday, December 23, 2009

LYLS Chapter 6 - Bella's Version


Intimacy

"'It's about intimacy, Edward. Making love with you is a total expression of how we feel about each other - our words in action. Every time you touch me I realize this is forever, and I know that you are mine completely.' Edward stepped towards me, murmuring my name against my neck. I struggled to continue. 'Your changing me is such a gift; you are telling me that you want me forever, that you want to make love to me forever. I just want to give myself completely to you in the process, so that you can feel, immediately before, what it means to me that you would do that for me.'"



Learning Bella

"He reached around to touch my clit and then hesitated, reaching forward and grabbing one of my hands, pulling my own hand back to my body while he pulled his hips back slightly to take some weight off my other hand. I could feel the pressure of him moving inside me against my fingers. My skin was wet and warm under my hand. His hand rested on top of my hand while I rubbed my clit, he was feeling how I touched myself. His body pushed in and out of me, his hips rubbing circles against my bottom."



More

"He sat back against his heels and stared at me like this for a long moment, his eyes moving up and down the length of my body, his hands resting on my knees. Neither of us spoke and my heart felt like it was too big for my body. Tears filled my eyes and spilled over; I was completely overwhelmed with what was happening between us; every moment I felt like I was falling in love with him again. I had everything I needed and would never get enough of this man. Edward didn't say anything, he just looked at me. I knew my tears communicated what his body could not. He lowered himself between my legs and put his mouth against mine, kissing me deeply."


Review by babbles:

This chapter was so great, I love frisky Edward...

“But that is what would happen if I had just finished making love to you and then tasted your blood. Are you serious with this?” His voice didn’t sound angry, it sounded almost amused. “In this scenario, you’re going to make love to me and then - if I can even stop myself from draining you in my post-coital bliss - effectively be on fire for three days, you do know that right?”

Their conversation regarding him changing her was beautiful, and extremely well written... I read it twice, When Edward tells her “Bella, I want you changed more than I can possibly explain. It’s a gift for me. The waiting is killing me, too.”

Bella not hesitating to initiate on the beach with him, Greatness!
The Blow Job, EXCELLENT!

"I felt his body grow hard against me, and I looked up at him, my mouth falling open. “Vampire,” he whispered by way of explanation and smiled impishly." - LMAO! I love it!

Great quote via twisherry:

"Bella, I want you changed more than I can possibly explain. It's a gift for me. The waiting is killing me, too."

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