Bits and Pieces Chapter 8 (Smut Monday) - The Blissing of Edward

For Me

"If I could have found words, I would have told her that nothing was more beautiful than the skin on her shoulders, nothing was softer than the curve of her breasts, nothing made my fingers twitch like the slope of her waist, and nothing made my body more aroused than the sight of her entirely naked, for me....

....It was the kiss that changed everything. Nothing was the same after this; I felt my mouth melting as I relaxed and just let myself experience, as I let her trust me but guide us both."

Feast

"The towel fell from her shoulders onto the bed but she didn't notice. Her heartbeat slowed, her lips were wet and parted as she stared at me. She examined me with a completely ravenous stare, shamelessly letting her eyes take in every line, every curve, and every ridge.

I stood before her, letting my eyes feast likewise, letting the image of her shaking body burn into my memory, feeling the smell of her sex completely envelop the humid air. I had never smelled her so aroused before and I felt at once annihilated and empowered with the knowledge that I did this to her.

She wants me. We can do this....

....I put my hand on her hair, watching a drop of water hang from a wet strand and fall onto her breast. The water was illuminated by the light in the room, and the droplet mesmerized me..."

Taste

"She smiled slightly, then, her eyes locked to mine, and leaned forward, running her tongue from the base of my length to the tip, sucking off the fluid there, moaning slightly.

I was frozen in place, my feet had sealed to the floor.

She parted her lips and I almost came at the sight of her pink tongue behind her small teeth. She lowered her mouth over my erection and I tested my strength, stilling my movements completely. It was unlike anything else. The feel of her tongue moving over my skin was everything the vision of her perfect mouth promised. Her mouth felt scalding against my flesh, slippery and humid and perfect. She looked up at me, completely unselfconscious, with her mouth spread around me and I realized, from the look in her eyes, that she would give me anything. I watched my erection disappear in her mouth, her small fist covering my base. She moved her hand and slowly took as much of me as she could."

Lost in the Feel

"I let my mouth wander over her skin, down her neck, to her collarbones, to her breasts where I hovered, tasting her on my lips, teasing her skin with my breath. I tested the strength of my touch on her flesh and ran my hand over the side of her breast, feeling the weight of it, pressing it in and up with my hand. I palmed it gently and squeezed as she hissed out a breath between her teeth. I lowered my hand to cup her, rolling her nipple between my fingers. I found myself lost in the feel of her, and all at once entirely understood the male fascination with breasts."

Inside

"I needed to feel her on my lips, needed to get closer to the source of the scent of Bella, purely Bella, warm and clean and deep. 'I just...' I mumbled, inching closer. 'I need...' I pressed my lips against her folds, kissing her chastely, licking my lips immediately. 'I wish so much I could...' taste you, I wanted to say. Lick you. Make you climax with my lips, my tongue, my entire face. There was nothing in the world I wanted more in that moment than to taste her sex. Not her blood, just her sex, just this. 'You smell so good.'

I stroked her with my fingers, bringing my thumb to stroke her clit, reaching down and pushing one, then two fingers inside Bella.

My mind reeled and my head dropped to her thigh as I watched my fingers move over her skin and disappear inside her.

Inside Bella. My Wife."

Move

"She looked at me and her face held an expression of such excitement and joy, it cracked my chest into a million, delicious pieces. 'Move in me, Edward...I need to feel you moving inside me.' Her voice was hoarse and it was the single most beautiful thing I had ever heard."

Blissful

"'God, baby,' I whispered. 'I didn't know'

She lay beneath me, looking positively blissful. I rolled off of her, feeling like a God as her form shook with satisfied exhaustion. I pulled her tiny, naked body against mine, kissing her hair, neck, shoulders.

'Bella,' I whispered.

'Mmmmm?' she mumbled, kissing my chest.

'I am so in love with you.'

There were no words beyond this."

 

Review by kassiah:

Finally I am able to read this. First can I just say Lola that I love you. And when I started reading LYLS and ALE, I didn't know you at all. And now, I have come to know and love you and it means so much to me. So thank you. And thank you for all that you put into your stories. And for this added insight into what is, in my opinion, one of the best fics I have ever read and certainly the best AU.

This is one of my favorite things ever: "Never before Bella had I touched myself with such insane need for release. Never before had I let my fantasies take shape with someone, let alone with my one. I prided myself on my control, I knew my control was immense, but with Bella it was too close to snapping." His one. It would have been easier for him if it weren't with Bella. I mean, I know tht he couldn't have been with anyone else but still. You summed it up so well. <3

Until I read LYLS, I didn't really think that Edward questioned how much Bella wanted him. But now, and especially after reading this, I know that he did. I loved this: "Say you’re ready. Tell me you want me. I won’t ever say no again." It was just so...like he needed reassurance and needed to give it to her too.

This is so powerful: "There was nothing in the world I wanted more in that moment than to taste her sex. Not her blood, just her sex, just this." because for sure, you would think his dominant thought would have been bloodlust. Always.

When he said "I didn't know" to her in LYLS, I really loved it. I loved that even though he didn't explain to Bella what he meant, and even when he did, he couldn't explain it very well. When he said this: "I didn’t know it could be like this. Didn’t know I could know everything she needed so instinctively." and when he said "God, oh God you’re better than anything else, better than anything I could imagine… I didn’t know…" It explained it as fully as he could, even though it was in his mind. And Lola, it is so beautiful.

And by the way, I fucking love it when he says "oh, please." just sayin'

So then when he is thinking about her blood, I was surprised by this: "However, instead of feeling the venom pool in the back of my mouth, I felt a pang of anxiety in my chest." No, surprised is the wrong word. I was proud of him. And I love you.

I love when he gets all primal and possessive. Really.

This sentence was very important, I think: "as soon as the smell of our lovemaking was overpowered by scents of the ocean, the trees, the night, I missed her acutely." The scent of them together grounds him and he misses it when it's gone. That was one reason that I didn't understand how he was able to leave and go to New Hampshire in ALE. I didn't ask for this outtake and frankly, didn't think about it, but I would be curious to see that from his POV. How did he get by, being apart from this for that many days?

That was amazing Lola. Thank you so, so much for writing it. ILY"

Great Quote via SpunkMe:

"Something primal and possessive ripped from me in that moment and I brought my fingers back to her flesh, sweeping them across her wet skin, pooling blood and the product of our lovemaking in the space between my fingertips, and bringing them again to my lips. With a growl I sucked my fingers, owning and craving her virginal blood. My blood. In that moment there was no greater truth: this blood belonged to me."

LYLS Chapter 16 - Good For Us

Stitches

"'Bella, Bella.' Edward's voice was pained. 'Bella. Shit. Open your eyes.' My eyelids fluttered open and Edward grabbed my hand, pulling it against a towel on my head....

....His face was wracked with agony; I had never seen him like this . His face was inches from min. 'This may hurt a bit.' His voice was harsh, almost angry. He injected lidocaine into a couple different spots on my forehead as he held gauze to the cut. I had no idea how big the cut was, but judging from the blood on the towel I was holding, it was a pretty nasty gash. He cleaned the area with alcohol and iodine and opened the sterile suture kit."

Distract Me

"'Bella, get rid of the towel.' I looked down and threw it into the sink. 'Spread your legs.' His voice was a growl.

'What?' I wasn't sure that I head heard him right.

'Please, Bella, I need to smell you a different way. Spread your lets.' His voice was pleading, softer. I spread my legs. His eyes relaxed slightly. 'Distract me, now, please.' He was tortured, his hands steady as he began sewing my cut, but his eyes betrayed the feelings he was fighting....

....I pushed my index finger inside of me, feeling my own wetness mixed with Edward's semen inside of me from the middle of the night. I brought my finger to his lips drawing it along his mouth, looking into his eyes. 'I love you.'

He inhaled a tiny bit, his tongue touching his lower lip. I moaned reflexively. His eyes looked into mine; his expression still pained, but mixed with something else now...lust, but sexual lust. 'It's us It's both of us in you.' He said quickly....

....'More, Bella, please, Again.' I repeated my action, letting my fingers touch his lip then come to rest on his cheek."

Let Go via anntastic23

"'Edward, come here,' He didn't move. 'Edward, come here.' Something deep inside me told me what he needed. He turned and walked to me, his face tight. I pulled him into my arms and he stood, stiff against me, his arms not moving. I let go of him and laid back against the counter, my legs open against edge of the marble.

Worldessly, he pushed into me, and thrust himself against my hips as he whimpered softly. His eyes stared at his body thrusting in me. He didn't make a sound. His hands grabbed my hips, bruising me I knew. I didn't care. His eyes never left the sight of us coming together, never blinked, but I could see him inhaling deeply, see his face relax, his amber eyes soften.

'Yes, baby, let go...' I whispered."

Edward's Pain

His movements quickened, his legs shuddering behind me as he pushed hard against me, his hips bruising my ass I knew. I still didn't care. He cried out, a dry sob, as he pulsed in me, his eyes meeting mine for his climax, the pain on his face excruciating. 'I don't know how to do it!" He cried after he came into me, his head falling against my stomach. His arms pulled my body against his and carried me as he crumpled to the floor.

I wrapped my arms around his neck, kissing the cheeks, his lips, his neck, his ear, his collarbone. 'It helped having me aroused.' I said quietly. 'It helped your control.'

He nodded, looking me in the eye. The pain and fear in his eyes broke my heart."

Get on the Boat via gkkstitch

"Alice was waiting for us on the beach, her nervous energy palpable. 'Why didn't you wait ten minutes for Carlisle you stubborn bastard? You knew he was close.' She smacked him hard, but I could see relief on her face.

'You know why, Alice.' His words were a grumble. Grumpy Edward was rearing his head. His eyes met Alice's, and he growled to me. 'Get on the boat, Bella.'

'Excuse me?' I asked, shocked at his tone.

'Just get on the boat.' His voice was sharp. I didn't understand but saw Alice avoiding his gaze, clearly hiding something from him."

Time with Emmett via anntastic23

"Emmett smiled at me. 'I like this cabin much better. Come on, check it out.' He grabbed my hand and pulled me up the three steps onto the wide porch and opened the front door."

Promise Me

"I walked over to a patch of soft green moss and sat down...Emmett came over and joined me. We watched some birds above us, quiet in our thoughts...

...He looked over at me, his face suddenly serious. 'Bell, you have to promise me something, ok?'

'What's that, Emmett?'

'Promise me, because you're choosing this life, that you'll find the good in it. That you'll find something you love - other than me, of course,' his fingers pulled confidently at his shirt, 'and live for it. That you'll make the most out of what you can be. That you'll finally see yourself for who and what you are. Ok?'

I felt tears stinging my eyes at all his hopes for me, his expectations that I could be this person overwhelmed me. 'Emmett, I don't know how I'll feel after...it all just feels like a very big unknown. I can promise to try.' I sighed, looking at him. 'It makes me feel worlds better to know you'll be there.'"

Just Like Heaven via anntastic23

"He looked up at me and nodded slightly. His fingers began moving over the strings of the guitar, the opening chords of Just Like Heaven flowing gently into the room. I watched him, my heart rate picking up at the familiar, beautiful song. His version was slow, obviously acoustic. Every sound had stopped around me as his hands moved beautifully over the guitar strings. He began to sing, his eyes meeting mine every few moments. His voice was unearthly beautiful; I froze, watching him.

"He put the guitar down and held his arms out to me. I climbed into his lap, kissing his mouth with all of the love, hunger, reassurance, and need I could muster. His hands clung to me, his eyes watching me with such naked raw love. I felt tears falling down my cheeks.

'Soon.' He whispered against me. 'I promise you.'"

Dessert via anntastic23

"Esme cooked me the most unbelievable dinner.....The entire family joined me at the table, cracking jokes, telling stories. There was enough food to feed all of us and then some, but of course I was the only one eating. I felt several sets of male eyes on my mouth as I ate the strawberries off the cake before I noticed Edward shooting his brothers scolding looks. Jasper and Emmett left before us to build the bonfire. After dinner the rest of us all cleaned up in seconds, and whisked me down the beach to the fire pit, where a large fire was roaring into the otherwise dark night sky.

Family Bonding via anntastic23 and gkkmouse

"I looked around the fire at my family. 'You miss us already, don't you Bella?' Alice asked across the flames.

'I do!' I said, putting my hands over my face.

'Don't worry, kiddo. Edward will show you the time of your life as long as you're here.' Emmett smiled at me.

'I know.' I turned and winked at Edward, my heartbeat picking up, heavy in my chest.

He stood, his voice quiet, intense. 'Ok that's my cue. I'm taking my bride back to the house. Time for goodbyes.'

Everyone came and hugged me goodbye, telling me to have fun, be good, that they would see me in a few days. Emmett pulled me to him and I cried out in the pain of his crushing hug. Edward pulled him back, angry. Emmett's face was contrite. Some silent exchange occurred, Edward's face tighter than normal. 'I know,' Edward said, a low growl. 'She's tiny.' Emmett held out his fist silently as Edward bumped it with his own. The gesture was reassuring, brotherly."

Ravaged

"Edward pulled me up on his back as they all ran silently back towards the beach house. Edward and I waved from the door as they all walked towards the boat. He turned to me, closing the door against his back, leaning against it and staring at me.

'Are you ready to be ravaged, my little kitten?' He asked with a crooked smile on his face, his eyebrow cocked. He pulled his shirt over his head, his hard body gleaming in the dark room."

Review by vickitori303:

"There's a lot of blood and Carlisle isn't close enough to help. Edward had to do it all on his own and he did an amazing job. I love that Bella distracted him with her wetness combined with his sperm. I love that it helped. Your Bella is amazing, knowing just what to do to help Edward, letting him take her after all that he just went through, not caring and knowing that he was a bit forceful.

Thank you for her little adventure with Emmett. He is one of my favorite characters to read and you touched on one my favorite things about him, how much he loves life and how he sees the good in people. I love that she's getting to spend all this one on one time with each of the Cullen siblings.

I love that he sang here a song, I don't think he's ever sang to here before, only hummed to her. I love that was already preparing in his mind for her transformation. I thought the song was very fitting for them, I found myself getting a little teary eyed at their moment.

The camp fire was great. I like that Carlisle explained to Bella that they already discussed her transformation and the treaty with the wolves and that Jacob supported it, for her.

And then Emmett's eases the tension by making everyone laugh with old stories...haha."

Great quote via kassiah & twisherry:

"If one of you cold fuckers would actually bite me I might become a little bit graceful."

So here we are heading into the last chapter.  I sincerely hope that I can do it justice, as this is so near and dear to my heart in the FanFiction world.  I seriously wish so much that this was the change that Bella received, but I will forever just replace it in my mind, because I think Lola gave us all something so special with Chapter 17, that it is truly unmeasurable in my mind.  Please bear with me, as I try to come up with what I feel is the best I can do, I know that it will not compare at all, but I will try my hardest to represent it's awesomeness.

*Special thanks to anntastic23 for all of her help on Chapter 16.